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Tuesday, September 22, 2015

Adventure on the Ocean

Adventure on the Ocean by Ella-Rose

A long time ago...there were three friends. their names were Summer Hammond, Jasmine Smith and Ellie Mcdonald. The three of them found three charm necklaces in their favourite colours, green for Ellie, velvet purple for Jasmine and silver gold for Summer. Those necklaces weren’t any ordinary necklaces, they were magic ones that take them across the ocean.

They had to try and stop a queen who was mean that wanted to take over and rule the ocean instead of her brother, King Merry. They didn’t get along well at all because the Queen, Queen Malice, wanted to rule like I said. The three girls had to travel on a boat in a big storm. The boat sank, luckily the girls didn’t drown. Just to tell you Queen Malice is afraid of the dark! She would only sleep with a night light when she was little.
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1 comment:

  1. Wow Ella-Rose what a great piece of writing! I am so pleased to see you using your blog so enthusiastically!

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